A Lovers Thought. . . .

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  1. waffa

    waffa New Member

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    A Lovers Thought


    Sadness, a skip in my heart everytime I think of you.
    But lately, my heart has been fluttering.
    As I sit here in the dark with 2 candles lit.
    I cry and fantasize about life
    and how it would be if you were here by my side.
    Tonight of all nights, I feel your pain.
    You're suffering inside and have no one to let go with.
    I too have that same pain.
    I sometimes wonder,
    "Will the pains that we're having right now cause our break-up?"
    I wonder. "Is this feeling I have right now a goodbye?"
    I wonder. I question our love everyday.
    A questionable love is a forbidden love.
    A love that dreaming women run from,
    a love that kills emotions for that real love.
    Do you question our love as I do?
    I believe so.
    A love scorn, that's what we are.
    A love sorn, a love torn and in need of new faith.
  2. RAHEN

    RAHEN Team leader

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    bautifully superb...aisi cheezen tau dimagh mein se guzarti rehti hain...aur unhe suljhane ki koshish mein zindagi guzar jati hai....v.nice and lovely...thanks 4 sharing....:D
  3. glimmering_candle

    glimmering_candle New Member

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    Wow
    Good , So Goood!
  4. waffa

    waffa New Member

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    fatyma ji aap k mind say ya hur aik k mins say guzarti hai .lolz any ways thank alot 4 giving ur wordz.... n also thnkz GC
  5. Muzna

    Muzna New Member

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    wonderful poem :)
  6. waffa

    waffa New Member

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    thnkz muzna dear.........
  7. eastwast

    eastwast New Member

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    Nice One........
  8. waffa

    waffa New Member

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    thnkz dear............
  9. moments

    moments New Member

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    Wonderful feelings................
  10. Miss_Sweet

    Miss_Sweet New Member

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    very nice....superb:)
  11. waffa

    waffa New Member

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    thnkz u bilal n dear sweetO 4 shaRin ur thinkin
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