Heartbreak In A Mirror

Discussion in 'Original English Poetry' started by Enigmatic_Persona, Nov 10, 2007.

  1. Enigmatic_Persona

    Enigmatic_Persona New Member

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    A silent stare into the eyes of the unknown unearthed by the fading breath of love.
    I surrender to the causes that I've suffered for, the cruel inevitability that will rule my soul.
    Heartless, running blindly towards a sweet escape, the bitter taste of heartache upon my lips.
    I am bound to the strings that puppet my heart, the strings that snap and break under pressure.
    The master of fate pulls me apart dragging me away on a stretcher.
    Slowly succumbing to the subtle subversion of my subconscious,
    I'm suddenly subdued by self-sympathy.
    Divided and alone, I stand a shell running from a world wanting to get rid of me.
  2. Hina87

    Hina87 New Member

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    I'm depressed now. :D Seriously though, it was great. Deeply emotional. ;)
  3. mina12

    mina12 New Member

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    deep emotional...
    Last edited: Sep 29, 2008
  4. Mariamah

    Mariamah New Member

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    I know the feelings.. can emphasis...beautifully written..thanks for sharing! :)
  5. jasonlove83

    jasonlove83 New Member

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    Wow..very emotional..
    thanks for this
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