My Own Shayri (Dil Ka Dard)

Discussion in 'Original Urdu Poetry' started by ArmaaN, Sep 8, 2006.

  1. ArmaaN

    ArmaaN New Member

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    Dil Ka Dard Tu Samajhti Nahin..
    Khuun Ke Ansuu Rota Hai Yeh Dil,
    Tu Jaanti Nahin...

    Kabhi To Mere Dil Ka Haal Jaan...
    Kya Hain Is Dil Ke Armaan..
    Kabhi To Meri Muhabbat Ko Pehchaan...

    Par afsoos...

    Dil Ka Dard Tu Samajhti Nahin...

    Raat Din Teri Yaad Mein Rota Hai Dil
    Tujhe Paane Ki Aas Mein Tarapta Hai Dil...
    Tujhe Dekhne Ko Yun Machalta Hai Yeh Dil...

    Par Afsoos...

    Dil Ka Dard Tu Samajhti Nahin...
    Khuun Ke Ansuu Rota Hai Yeh Dil...Tu Jaanti Nahin...





    Hope You Liked It :)
    This Was My Own First Poetry :)

    Wrote it Two Months Ago..So I Thaught Why Not Share It Here :)
  2. Atlantic

    Atlantic New Member

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    Well Done...simply well expressed!
  3. ArmaaN

    ArmaaN New Member

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    Thanks alot Atlantic :)
  4. waffa

    waffa New Member

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    niCe bro:)
  5. RAHEN

    RAHEN Team leader

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    nicely expressed :up; - yup i liked it.
    keep going in writing poetries :up;


    Thanks 4 sharing
  6. ArmaaN

    ArmaaN New Member

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    Thanks waffa and Rahen :)
  7. Miss_Sweet

    Miss_Sweet New Member

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    woww bohat achi likhi hai :applaud;
  8. Kainaat

    Kainaat New Member

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    wah Awesome :D

    Keep them coming ab to "Unhon" ne bhi daad de di hai ab ki baar happy shairy karna :wink:
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