Though i say

Discussion in 'Original English Poetry' started by LuiTsean, Dec 22, 2006.

  1. LuiTsean

    LuiTsean New Member

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    Though I say
    Go as far as you want
    Hurt me as hard as you wish
    Though I say please don’t forget me.

    Seeing adorable face of yours
    Makes me feel I am more of yours
    Though I say please don’t leave my hand

    I love you, did you know?
    I’ll make you happy any how
    Though I say please don’t guess me wrong.

    Too much likings for you
    I don’t know do you feel too?
    Stealing your mind playing hide and seek
    Goes on the game for not just a week.
    So, listen what I say today Hun
    It is that you are only mine.

    Because of you are there
    My dreams are everywhere
    In the frozen thinking’s of mine
    Behind your heart and mind,
    I still bear my silent love
    Nobody knows only they laugh
    Knows only you my love till my last day with you……….my heart is full of mad addiction to you….it has no cure it has no effects it is only you
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  2. Miss_Sweet

    Miss_Sweet New Member

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    wow...good one :) keep posting
  3. friendlygal786

    friendlygal786 Well-Known Member

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    very deep...achi hai. keep sharing:thumbs:
  4. LuiTsean

    LuiTsean New Member

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    buddies i m glad to hear tht u liked it...but pls add reps
    Last edited: Dec 23, 2006
  5. Bluehacks

    Bluehacks New Member

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    very nice
    thanks for sharing

    reps added for sure!
  6. LuiTsean

    LuiTsean New Member

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    thx friends..thx bluehacks..
  7. RAHEN

    RAHEN Team leader

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    :applaud; this is simply superb...welldone..:up; wanna see more of ur poems..thanks 4 sharing..:)
  8. Fairy

    Fairy New Member

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    Very good :) Keep writing n sharing with us.
  9. villies

    villies New Member

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    hmmmm
    very nice luitseen
    you are also wrting good poems like sweety
  10. LuiTsean

    LuiTsean New Member

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    hey u dint lik my poems i wrote b4?

    waaaa....ur a bad boy
    :D
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